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It seemed as calm as an ocean could be
Almost as wide as the sea
With a mind that vast
How couldn't I dive in?
I guess that's why I decided to swim

So I delved into the deep ocean blue
I swam looking for you
I dove into the abyss
And I found this:
A snuffed out light
A heart that someone broke with all their might
A few broken parts
And some lost art
All of this caused me confusion
So I kept going to reach my conclusion
I wanted to see more
I kept straying away from the shore

After awhile I became lost
I felt my mind lose conscious thought
The water around preceded to choke me !
The lights grew darker so that I couldn't see!
I rushed to the surface to get back to land
But the water charged after me as I swam
The surface by then had turned into a storm
The ocean had taken on a horrible form
It consumed the sky and all around
There was no such thing as solid ground
The waves took me and dragged me down.....

And I felt myself float away
and begin to drown.....
:iconforevermenou:
>.>

Hm. I'm actually impressed with myself just a bit...

*pops my collar and wears dark sunglasses*

Side note: This is about someone I know. And no, I do not "love" him, how my friends put it.....like? intrigued by? possibly. I kind of just took the whole idea from the fact that he wears (or they're his natural color. idk) dark blue contacts. And just made me think of the ocean...
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:iconwendysarah:
that's amazing! where did u take this picture?
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*ForeverMenou Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
um...i just found it somewhere, i didnt actually take it myself.
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~Mylucifel Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Be Ee A Youuu Tea Full :D
I now I am a dork, and I hope you figured out what I meant above >.<
But seriously, tis amazing. Though it does make me think..
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*ForeverMenou Feb 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Think about what?
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~Mylucifel Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Gag! My phone mixed up comments :( I shall explain later >.<
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*ForeverMenou Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok
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~Mylucifel Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaaaaannnd my phone is still being evil :(
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*ForeverMenou Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
its ok ^_^
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